Stars's Rain

hm thats not good its boring and ugly

Ah allright I will do it in future and hope I will see some more pages ^^

I'm not verry good in english but I hope you will understand what I mean.
If you can understand german as well so tell me please ^^!
Your doujin is very nice and beautiful.
But I can't always read what you wrote. It's too small. Sorry.

But I will definitly look after it! XD