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Wie niedlich!
I find this short story quite well. You have described briefly and precisely the relationship between Sesshoumaru and Rin, and without changing the characters. On the contrary! Really very beautiful, like Sesshoumaru, his feelings so repressed and Rin, but not hurt with this compromise.
Maybe you could upload the Dojinshi so again in German? I can also help you if you like. (My German is much better than my English XDD)
Maybe you trace the lines again, so it does not look so sketchy. That would be great.
Well time to see what you still have it!
*Do I have to just watch*
Maybe you could upload the Dojinshi so again in German? I can also help you if you like. (My German is much better than my English XDD)
Maybe you trace the lines again, so it does not look so sketchy. That would be great.
Well time to see what you still have it!
*Do I have to just watch*
lovely story :)
and one more time rin knows better thinks to say as sesshomaru xD
and one more time rin knows better thinks to say as sesshomaru xD